Ben followed Thorton
into the nail hole and he found
himself in a dark pasage.
"where does this pasage lead?"
i said. Thorton pulled a little map out
of his pocket and handed it to me
'gosh' i said to myself 'how deep
are those pockets??'
i looked at the map and said 'wow!'
"so if we're here," Ben pointed at a spot
on the map, "than we have
this much more to walk!"
"drive you mean!" said Thorton.
and saying that, he took
a keyfob out
of his pocket and and clicked a button
and a with a whoosh
a blue hover car pulled up beside them.
"wow!" i said. "man! is wow all you
can say?" Thorton said "no,
but this is just so cool!" i said.
"well, hop on in! Thorton said hopping into
the car. "are you sure you can
drive?" i asked. "sure i can
drive, here in silverville
you just need to be over 10 years
old to drive a hovercar!
how old are you?''
''well, im 11 years old''
''wanna drive?'' thorton asked
''well i woulnt want to wreck it or anything.''
''well, ok i wont make you
drive, but your going to have to learn
because its fun!'' and Ben and
Thorton sped of.
will be cont.
3 comments:
i'm the first one to comment!!!!!!!!! great story i still think you should put some thing about the scientist coming back!!! Andrew
Evan
Are you writing this story?
I like the part about the cell phone and the car it sound really cute:)
I can't deside what part of the two cont. storys that I like better(hmmmmm)
(But I really like then both:)
-Kayla
yes im writing this story kayla. thanks ang, i will
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